These are a few different visual styles that I tested, depicting a badger with watercolour and pens. My favourites for this project are the 2 on the left. I think the style I’m going to choose is somewhere in between the 2. With a bit more detail that the bottom one but not as much scratchy shading as the top one.

This page consists of my developed plan. I’ve changed the title to ‘Family is Forever’ as I think this is a simple title that is easily understood by my target audience, children of around 5 to 10. Also the repetition of words starting with ‘F’ makes it catchy and memorable. A key theme of this wordless narrative is time and this titles gives this idea. I worked out the different types of ‘family’ I wanted to represent and which characters I’ll use for each.
The main feedback I got on my plan last week was to work on the actual narrative so I decided to structure the story with a broad narrative with mini narratives within this. The overall narrative is about the main character, a male fox, and his family and friends who he shows through a photo album if his life. The viewer then sees lots of little memories and moments from his life. These are the mini narratives.

This is a more in depth look at the narrative in a page by page breakdown of the story. It was suggested to me that the minimum pages for even a short narrative story is 12 pages. My plan has 14 pages plus 2 pages for the front and back cover. The narrative will be broken down into 4 sections, the current scene, memories from when the main fox was young, middle aged and old. The story will start and end with the current scene. In order to make a clear visual difference between the current scene and memories as to not cause confusion, I will do the current scene in structure full panel illustrations but I’ll do the memories in a more loose bubbled format.


With the story planned out I started designing the characters. I started by making a list of all the characters I’ll need and what stage or stages of their life they’ll be at. The characters in the story will be the main fox, the wife fox, fox parents, grandparents, siblings, children and grandchildren. As well as badgers, otters, hedgehogs and squirrels.









I researched lots of children’s books about animals and specifically foxes to get stylistic inspiration for my characters. One that really stood out to me was the illustrations from the book ‘Foxes in the Snow’. I also looked at Disney characters such as Nick Wilde from Zootopia. Disney are great at designing characters with lots of expression and personality. I wanted to make my characters somewhat humanised in regard to how them move to allow for more dynamic and expressive poses and facial expressions.


This is a storyboard of part of my story. This process helped me figure out composition, scenery and character poses. Now I’m ready to begin transferring the sketches to the right paper and start the final images.





























































































